Chapter 1 of Beatle Chicks John Lennon Fan Fic!!!!!

Ok People Ive Decided to be brave and let
you read the first chapter of my story!!!
Please can some one help me submit it to The
Roof Top fan fic site!!!!
So here goes!!! Please can you write your
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Thanks, well here goes Please Do Not Reply
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chapter 1
The ride to Scotland was quite a laugh until a stone hit the van window screen. Neil took off his hat and punched the shattered glass out.
It was 11.30pm in the middle of winter and it was freezing cold, so they had to pull over. Darcey and Phyllis who were huddled up in the back with John and Paul managed to grab their suitcases and get some sweaters out,so they could keep themselves warm.
Darcey had a few of John's old sweaters so she gave them to Neil,George and Ringo who were sat at front. John and Paul made do with their leather jackets and swiged a bottle of whisky to keep warm.
They started back off down the road again,but stopped after 2 miles because everybody was freezing cold again. This time each of the boys took it turns huddling up with the girls in the back while the other 2 sat in the front.
It was 2am in the morning when they finaly arrived, the hotel that they were ment to be staying at was closed for the night so they had to go next door to the B&B that was still open.
Darcey had drank too much whisky so she had fallen into a deep slumber so it was left to everbody else to get the equipment out of the van. While Phyllis got the rooms sorted out. Her and Paul shared, so did John and Darcey while George,Ringo and Neil had their own rooms.
As soon as everthing was all sorted out John went out to Darcey and carried her up to their room and tucked her up in bed.

John was still asleep when Darcey awoke in the morning she got up slowly as not to wake him, he looked so peaceful laying there. She quietly walked over to the window and opened the curtain slightly, so the light wouldn't shine onto his face. She stood there watching the snow fall and softly settling on the ground she shuddered as she felt the cold.
John opened his eyes and turned over expecting to see Darcey still asleep,he looked over at the window and saw her watching the snow. He quitely got up and went over to join her. Darcey hadn't heard
John walk over she felt his hands clasp round her waist and his warm breath on the back of her neck. "Mornin luv" he said kissing her neck. Darcey leaned back into his embrace she felt warm and safe in his arms, she wanted to stay there forever.
"Mornin" she replied back turning to face him
Darcy put her arms around his neck and kissed him on the lips.
"What times brekie, Im starved" Darcy raised her eyes and laughed "There I was just enjoying that romantic little moment John Lennon, then you say when's breakfast,what am I going to do with you" she teased running her finger down his nose. "Well you can do anything you like dear but after breakfast" he kissed her on the lips again.
"Come ed lets go" he said smacking her backside.
The pair of them made themselves decent then headed off down stairs to find some food.


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Not bad, BC, but I think you need to work a little on your punctuations.

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Bearkat77's Beatlemaniac Page
Bearkat77's Tribute to John Lennon
Bearkat77's Tribute to Ringo Starr

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Tahoma, Arial, Sans-Serif">Quote:</font><HR>Originally Posted By Beatle Chick:
Please Do Not Reply
On The Story On This Page because I want
this just to be the Fan Fic Story!!!!!
No One Can Add To It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Well, there goes that.

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