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Jul 02, 2005, 06:53 AM
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Apple Scruff
Join Date: Jun 08, 2005
Location: Russia, Syas'stroy
Posts: 134
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Memories
There was time, when the sun didn't shine,
And the haze spread all over my soul.
The world was so near, but it wasn't mine.
Endless twilight came. I was a mole.
I never knew, there were leaves on the trees,
The skies of blue and grass of green.
I never knew, there was ground underneath,
I never had the clue, where have i been?
I never knew, there were birds in the air,
The long straight way and no maze.
I never knew, there was me, standing there,
How could i live without my face?
I remember the room, bolted from the inside,
And all mirrors were silent to me.
I came there long ago, wishing only to hide,
But in darkness i soon lost the key.
I never knew, there was ceiling above,
My feet are below, and i can go.
I thought, all i needed was love,
But yet people' faces enchant me so.
I never knew, there were hands, that can wave,
Too many fingers, i feel sick.
I never knew, there was light, that can save,
And every flower i can pick.
Once i thought, i was mad, but i know that is true,
For my feelings were burden to me.
Nothing should be denied, maybe this is the clue,
I am flying away and i'm free.
Last edited by Nowheregirl : Jul 02, 2005 at 07:19 AM.
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Jul 02, 2005, 08:31 AM
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Sun King
Join Date: Jun 30, 2003
Location: colorado
Posts: 23,460
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Nice piece of poetry :)
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Jul 02, 2005, 07:37 PM
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Old Brown Shoe
Join Date: Sep 08, 2002
Posts: 3,529
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excellent
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You and I, country dreamer
when there's nothing else to do
Me oh my, country dreamer
make a country dream come true
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Jul 03, 2005, 06:05 PM
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Sun King
Join Date: Feb 13, 2003
Location: Ohio
Posts: 9,373
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Very Good! I like it
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"You should have thought of that before we left the house"
"Logic?? My God, the man's talking about logic. We're talking about universal Armageddon!" Dr. McCoy, Wrath of Khan
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Jul 09, 2005, 07:52 AM
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Apple Scruff
Join Date: Jun 08, 2005
Location: Russia, Syas'stroy
Posts: 134
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Thanks! 
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Jul 09, 2005, 03:21 PM
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Taxman
Join Date: Aug 24, 2003
Location: Northern California
Posts: 1,836
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Wow, that's an excellent poem! Thanks for sharing!
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Jul 13, 2005, 04:52 AM
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Apple Scruff
Join Date: Jun 08, 2005
Location: Russia, Syas'stroy
Posts: 134
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Well, i never expected it to be excellent. But i dreamt about writing kind of this for a year. And 12.07 was my second birthday, and my grandpa caught 12 moles in his garden (too funny, but true). Such delightful, unexpected and crazy experiences shouldn't be lost, as now i feel quite ordinary.
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