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Old Jul 02, 2005, 06:53 AM   #1
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There was time, when the sun didn't shine,
And the haze spread all over my soul.
The world was so near, but it wasn't mine.
Endless twilight came. I was a mole.

I never knew, there were leaves on the trees,
The skies of blue and grass of green.
I never knew, there was ground underneath,
I never had the clue, where have i been?

I never knew, there were birds in the air,
The long straight way and no maze.
I never knew, there was me, standing there,
How could i live without my face?

I remember the room, bolted from the inside,
And all mirrors were silent to me.
I came there long ago, wishing only to hide,
But in darkness i soon lost the key.

I never knew, there was ceiling above,
My feet are below, and i can go.
I thought, all i needed was love,
But yet people' faces enchant me so.

I never knew, there were hands, that can wave,
Too many fingers, i feel sick.
I never knew, there was light, that can save,
And every flower i can pick.

Once i thought, i was mad, but i know that is true,
For my feelings were burden to me.
Nothing should be denied, maybe this is the clue,
I am flying away and i'm free.

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Old Jul 02, 2005, 08:31 AM   #2
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Nice piece of poetry :)
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Old Jul 02, 2005, 07:37 PM   #3
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Old Jul 03, 2005, 06:05 PM   #4
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Very Good! I like it
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Old Jul 09, 2005, 07:52 AM   #5
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Old Jul 09, 2005, 03:21 PM   #6
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Wow, that's an excellent poem! Thanks for sharing!
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Old Jul 13, 2005, 04:52 AM   #7
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Well, i never expected it to be excellent. But i dreamt about writing kind of this for a year. And 12.07 was my second birthday, and my grandpa caught 12 moles in his garden (too funny, but true). Such delightful, unexpected and crazy experiences shouldn't be lost, as now i feel quite ordinary.
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