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Old Jun 19, 2006, 12:40 PM   #1
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Thumbs up John Fan Fic - The Greatest Dilemma

Hello all. I'm new here so, hi!
I have written (actually I am writing) a fan fiction about John, but there are appearances by the other Beatles in it as well. It does contain strong language and sexual content, so I didn't want to post it here directly, but I would love for you all to read it and give me some feedback.
Here is the link: http://groups.msn.com/Beatlesfanfic
The story is called The Greatest Dilemma. I welcome and encourage all feedback. It is in process, but there are already 10 chapters or so. Please check it out and give me some feedback.
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Old Jun 19, 2006, 07:05 PM   #2
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I sure hope Chapter 11 is coming soon! I really enjoyed reading that. Very nice. I'll be waiting.
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Old Jun 20, 2006, 10:07 AM   #3
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got done reading it bout an hour ago and good reading thus far
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 05:08 AM   #4
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You've got talent. Have you thought of submitting your work to Rooftop Sessions once you finish the story?

Oh, and how about some George stories?
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 06:40 AM   #5
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You've got talent. Have you thought of submitting your work to Rooftop Sessions once you finish the story?

Oh, and how about some George stories?
I second that right down to the George request
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 11:57 AM   #6
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Thanks for all the comments. I'm working on Chapter 12 at the moment. I'll be posting Chapter 11 as soon as possible. It just gets kind of crazy between work, and writing... and living! lol!
And as soon as I get done with this story I'll start on a George story just because of your requests. I was going to do Paul (so to speak), but I'll write one about George before Paul I guess, or maybe both in the same story. Who knows?
Anyway, thanks again for all the comments! I appreciate it! And no, I don't really know anything about Rooftop Sessions. What are they?
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 12:06 PM   #7
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Great story.Keep on Posting this.
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 01:27 PM   #8
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Do tell when chapter 11 is up, I'm looking forward to reading it as I'm sure quite a few others are as well!
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www.rooftopsessions.com is an e-zine of Beatle fan fic. Check out the guide lines and check out the stories. High caliber works.
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Old Jun 22, 2006, 12:43 AM   #10
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I like your story, let's have more. And I would love a Paul story!
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Old Jun 22, 2006, 04:00 PM   #11
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Okay, chapters 11 and 12 have been added and I'm working on 13. Sorry I'm so slow.

I hate the site where I've posted my story, but I don't know where else to do it. I hate that you can only post a bit on a page at a time. It takes forever to add stuff when it keeps saying "Your entry is too long!" Ugh.

Anyway, thanks for the info about rooftop sessions. I'll have to check it out.
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Old Jun 22, 2006, 05:36 PM   #12
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omg, thank you, yay I have something to read now!! hehe
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ahhh! the suspense is killing me!...im beginning to hate the words "coming soon" Real nice writing.
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Old Jul 01, 2006, 10:05 AM   #14
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Trying very hard to maintain my patience for ch 13... I've already checked for updates 2x today.
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Trying very hard to maintain my patience for ch 13... I've already checked for updates 2x today.
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Sorry guys, I'm working on it. It just gets a little difficult between work and writing and everything else I have to do. Maybe I shouldn't have posted it until it was completely done? I dunno. I appreciate all you support.

I'm currently working on Chapter 14. I'll post chapter 13 asap.
Thanks for your patience!
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Old Jul 03, 2006, 08:22 AM   #16
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Really nice story! I've just read the first two chapters as I've been ridiculously busy. But my summer holiday begins on Monday so I'll finally have time to read something else than research articles
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Very lovely story, very good writing, imo! I could barely stop reading!

Lets us know when 14 is up! The suspence is killing me!
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Sorry guys, I'm working on it. It just gets a little difficult between work and writing and everything else I have to do. Maybe I shouldn't have posted it until it was completely done? I dunno. I appreciate all you support.

I'm currently working on Chapter 14. I'll post chapter 13 asap.
Thanks for your patience!
sorry, i didn't mean for htat to sound snappy like it did. I just mean that it's a great story, and i can't wait to read the next part. :)
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Cokate,
No, I didn't think that at all. All is good. :D
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Thanks so much for your patience! Chapter 13 has been added, but please beware!!! (Also, I am about halfway through chapter 14.)
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