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Sexie Sadie
Mar 24, 2003, 02:28 PM
ok my english class had an assignment to write a poem about some one who has had a great impact on our lives...of course, i did one on george, and I thought it would be fun and sweet to post poems or songs that anyone here may have composed...this is mine...

His manuscripts survive eternally engraved in our hearts,
as do his kind, severe eyes,
Our cast iron hearts weep for such a harsh, final reality,
From his odes to peaces to his memoires of hope
He eagarly graced this earth
and saved so many
here's to the rich, tapestry life,
myths of twilight,
and his valient art of dying,
We love you and miss you dearly,
George. graemlins/angel2.gif

Hari's Chick
Mar 24, 2003, 07:01 PM
That is really very, very beautiful. Thanks for sharing that.

Savoy Truffle
Mar 24, 2003, 07:27 PM
Yes, thankyou! It's lovely and heartfelt!

SgtPepper2107
Mar 25, 2003, 01:29 PM
That was very sweet and beautiful.Thanks.

beatlebangs1964
Mar 25, 2003, 09:18 PM
What a lovely piece, Sadie. I hope you got an A+.

FPSHOT
Mar 25, 2003, 10:11 PM
That is a beautiful poem, Sexie Sadie.

lennonluvr9
Mar 26, 2003, 04:44 AM
That was beautiful! I really liked it!

beatlewho01-02
Mar 27, 2003, 07:45 PM
What grade did you get for this? I hope you got an A because it's so beautiful.

foolonthehill664
Mar 27, 2003, 08:13 PM
aw, thats really pretty, its a close tie between john and george as my favorite beatle, but pauls so pretty, its crazy lol. but i'l heard a lot of poems writen on behalf of the beatles and that one that you wrote has a lot of good quality almost brought me to tears hehe

oracle193
Mar 30, 2003, 09:55 AM
Hey Sexy Sadie,
What a moving and heartfelt poem. It really
captures the essense of what George was all about!
Since I am a retired teacher I hereby grant you
an A+++. I hope your teacher gives you equal
regard! Jai Bhagwan!
graemlins/angel2.gif

old_moon_shining
Mar 31, 2003, 05:41 PM
Very thoughtfully written.

Sexie Sadie
Apr 03, 2003, 06:48 PM
thanks yall!